Wednesday, September 21, 2022

Writing Checklist

Writing Checklist

Good writers are multiply literate, able to choose appropriate styles for different purposes. These guidelines apply to writing formal English where, as in academic contexts, it is important to write clearly for an unknown or open-ended readership. This checklist is an ongoing collaboration between Matt Silliman and David Braden-Johnson; we offer it to our students and colleagues for their use, adaptation, and amusement. [1] [Updated 1/2023]



___  1.  Aviod misspelling, and use the write word, not just the won that looks or sounds rite, to.   Spell-check programs are no substitute for your own critical eye.

___  2.  Also using sentence fragments and incomplete sentences that are too long and run-on
sentences.   A complete sentence has a subject, a verb, and an object, normally in that order, and punctuation that closely mimics the cadence of the spoken word.

___  3.  Be sure the verb and the subject agrees in number.   In particular, limit the use of ‘they’ and ‘their’ in referring to singular nouns, unless consciously intending to align with a specific person's identity. It is often helpful in this regard to recast sentences using plural nouns.

___  4.  Kept noun and verbs consistent in number and tense.  It is usually best not to combine plural and singular nouns, and to remain in the past, the present, or the future, rather than jumping around.

___  5.  Remember not to boldly split where no infinitive has gone before.   Form the infinitive of an English verb by placing the preposition ‘to’ in front of it. Let nothing come between them.

___  6.  Its important alway’s to use ones apostrophe’s correctly.  With few exceptions, form possessives by adding an apostrophe and an ‘s.’ However, the possessive of ‘it’ is ‘its,’ since by custom we reserve ‘it’s’ for the contraction of ‘it is.’

___  7.  Like, don’t use contractions or slang and stuff in formal writing.   Like overworked clichés and colloquial expressions, contractions are informal, so usually unsuitable for formal prose.

___  8.  Semicolons separate independent clauses of a sentence; each of which is, in itself; a
complete sentence on its own.   A semicolon links two closely related thoughts, often where one explains or depends on the other.

___  9.  Everyone that refers to persons as objects is a brick.  ‘That’ is for things. Use ‘who’ for persons.

___  10.  It is harder-to-read sentences with misplaced hyphen-disorder.  Hyphenate to combine confusing multiple-word modifiers into a single compound adjective. However, the ‘ly’ of an adverb replaces the hyphen.

___  11.  It is in the book we read in class, Awkward Introductions, written by the author Wry Tur, where he believes…  Writing is an art form; not only clarity of expression but grace, elegance, and beauty matter, so edit out wordy, awkward, stilted, clichéd, and inelegant prose. In place of the above sentence, try: “In Awkward Introductions, Tur writes…”

___  12.  Doesn’t everybody know rhetorical questions are dismissive and obnoxious?  A rhetorical question is just a disguised statement. To avoid putting your readers off, write declaratively.

___  13.  Save “quotation marks” for when you are directly “quoting” a “person” or “text.”   Writers use scare quotes to express their suspicion of certain terms, but far better either to say what is misleading about a term, or choose one that conveys your meaning.

___  14.  The passive voice is to be avoided; it is generally preferred that the subject be identified
clearly.  Passive voice, or indirect discourse, conceals the subject altogether (as in Rumsfeld’s faux apology for the Iraq war: "Mistakes were made") or tags it on awkwardly at the end of the phrase ("The bathroom was gone to by me"). There is nothing wrong with the occasional use of the first person in formal writing; hiding behind the passive voice lends your prose only the illusion of objectivity.

___  15.  Since before the dawn of time, writers have sought to express themselves clearly and simply, eschewing vague, grandiloquent composition and lugubrious tracts of laborious periphrasis.   Be clear and direct, and avoid making global claims for which you lack evidence.
           
___  17.  Mankind can no longer tolerate, in his language, the presumption of maleness as
the norm.   Misplaced gender-specific language is both imprecise and offensive. Use ‘humanity’ instead of ‘mankind,’, and look for similar ways to say, gracefully, what you really mean. Remember that ‘they’ is plural, so either use a pronoun suited to the person about whom you are speaking, or recast the sentence in the plural.

___  18.  I feel it is misleading to express your thoughts and claims as though they were
sensations or emotions.    Feelings are important, but you experience them, as with emotions, sensations, or intuitions. A thought is potentially more public, something you do, and is subject to intellectual challenge and question. Formal writing should almost always invite correction or challenge, so never use ‘feel’ where ‘think’ will do. 

___  11.  Keep[2] footnotes[3] to[4] a minimum,[5] but as some great writer once said:  "Always
acknowledge the sources of your ideas."  Notes should credit and direct readers to all substantive sources of your ideas and language, not distract them from what you are saying.

___  19.  Rely primarily on your choice of words, rather than {extra punctuation!!!!!}, non-standard fonts, CAPITALS, underlining, or italics, to express emphasis or creativity in your writing.   Unless a particular task demands a different format, present your writing in Times New Roman 12-point type, double-spaced, flush left, one inch margins, black ink on 8..5” x 11” paper, stapled if more than one page. If you set the defaults in your word processor to these parameters, most of the time you will not have to think about it.


[1] When writing for our courses you may bend these rules at will, provided you justify your deviations in footnotes.
[2] Rhymes with peep.
[3] I.e.: notes at the foot of the page.
[4] As contrasted with too, or two.
[5] I owe this thought to my writing teacher.

Friday, March 14, 2014

MCLA Students with Disabilities Policy Statement

MCLA: Students with Disabilities 

Any student who believes he or she may need an accommodation based on the impact of a documented disability may be eligible for accommodations that provide equal access to educational programs at MCLA. Students are advised to contact that Disability Resource Office at 413-662-5318 or stop by CSSE, Eldridge Hall to schedule an appointment. In compliance with the Americans with Disabilities Act (ADA), the Disability Resource Office will work with students to coordinate reasonable accommodations. Students who wish to request accommodations should do so within the first four weeks of the semester. Once accommodations have been determined, the student will provide a copy of his/her accommodation plan to each individual instructor. Students must fulfill all course requirements in order to receive passing grades in their classes, with or without reasonable accommodations. Please note that accommodations cannot be granted retroactively. 

Thursday, January 23, 2014

Editorial Suggestions Key

DKJ's Editorial Suggestions Key
(See also Handout CL/"grading")


G: Basic grammatical errors (see Writing Checklist/"grammar” for details). 

S: Basic stylistic errors (see Writing Checklist/"style” for details).

(Typical marginal notes include: "pass" = passive voice; "ww" = wrong word; "awk" = awkward; "ss" = single-space; "ref" reference; "SI" = split infinitive; "frag" = fragment; "ro" = run-on.) 

R: More research required/research element missing or too brief/insufficient attention to details of the text(s).

C: CRITO outline missing/incomplete.

B: Complete/accurate bibliographic information missing (here are several acceptable citation styles).

Q: Student-generated questions missing/incomplete.

A-papers contain very few to none of the errors above; B-papers contain a small degree of one or more of the errors above; C-papers contain a significant degree of one or more of the errors above; D-papers contain a borderline unacceptable degree of several of the errors above; F-papers contain an entirely unacceptable degree of several of the errors above.